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Chris -

 

I think your site is attractive, easy to navigate, and easy to understand. All of the links worked for me. Your use of a different colored side bar on the right let me know I had moved to a different page - nice touch. The color scheme is pleasant but unobtrusive, it doesn't get in the way of your message. Thumbs Up

 

I caught a spot where the grammar got stretched. Look at the sentence about who you serve "From business, personal.... and seniors." there's never a "to" so the phrase is never closed. Maybe, "From A to B, C to D and E." would work? Or just drop the "from" altogether "A,B,C,D and E."

 

Really nice job! Best of luck with your business. :(

 

Beth

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Chris:

 

TimeSaver Services has been added to our Web Hosting Family Members page ;)

 

You asked sooooo nicely for the evaluation, I am so sorry but I honestly do not have the time presently. I sincerely apologize. When (If) I get back into allowing myself more time on these forums, I will come back to your site and give you my two cents.

 

Again, I am truly sorry :)

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