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My First Public Service Announcment Is Done

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hello

my name is Timur Nishanov iam 17 years old filmmaker, i came to America 4 years ago from Russia.

I have been making movies since 2001,

Today i have finnaly finished my first PSA ( PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCMENT) about teen pregnency, i would like to know if you guys like it or not? i would lvoe to hear your comments.

www.theent.com or direct link www.theent.com/PSA.html

 

Sincerely

TImur Nishanov

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Very good. I think it does a decent job of emphasising your point.

 

However, their is a grammatical error...

 

"of those, 1 in 7 has gotten pregnancy" shoud read "of those, 1 in 7 has gotten pregnant" or even "of those, 1 in 7 has become pregnant"

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I know but that what it said on the website on their site to use these words

i was thinking its wrong

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Heh...odd. <_<

 

Anyway, as for the actual video, I liked it. The last guy was great... gave the sense of "yea..." :dance: like he thought it was really cool to be able to say yes, but then began to think about the reality of what he's done, and didn't look so smug anymore. :dance:

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Anyway, as for the actual video, I liked it. The last guy was great... gave the sense of "yea..."  like he thought it was really cool to be able to say yes, but then began to think about the reality of what he's done, and didn't look so smug anymore

 

EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(

 

thats the whole point of this vid

 

BTW i just uploaded new one with fixed grammer and added a musiccomposed by my friend

www.theent.com/PSA.html it second one

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Very powerful ad, Timur... great work! Thumbs Up

 

I followed your last link but ended up at the same file with no music and the grammar mistake.

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Nope, at a glance I thought the 2nd one was a link to your music friend and clicked the 1st link. Sorry.

 

It's much better with the music, as you say. The voices could be a bit louder though - the music drowns them out a bit.

 

Great message too. No matter which camp one is in I think most can agree that it's best to wait until one's older and can make a more mature decision about sex.

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